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Why Agencies Lose $50K Deals
Ever wonder why some agencies consistently land $50K retainers while others struggle to close a $5K deal?
It’s not the results they deliver. It’s not even the pricing.
It’s their proposals.
Most agency proposals follow the same tired formula:
A long-winded intro about how innovative they are
A laundry list of services that sound impressive but mean nothing to the client
A vague promise of "improving performance" with no specifics
And guess what?
Every other agency is doing the exact same thing.
So when a CEO has 147 proposals in their inbox, all blending together in a sea of buzzwords, guess which ones they ignore?
All of them.
A winning proposal does three things differently:
1 . Mirrors the client’s exact words. When they hear, “As you mentioned, your CPA target is $47...,” they instantly know you were paying attention. Simple, but powerful.
2 . Scores their current setup. A 40 to 60 percent rating triggers something in their brain. They stop asking, “Is this agency good?” and start thinking, “How can they improve our results?”
3 . Translates potential into numbers. Instead of saying, “We’ll improve your campaigns,” say, “A 30 percent CPA reduction on your $100K monthly spend means $30K saved per month.”
Another smart move? Put testimonials at the end of your contracts, not your proposals.
Proposals get skimmed. Contracts get shared with every decision-maker.
Smart, right?
These small shifts make a huge difference in closing bigger retainers with premium clients. And when closing gets easier, scaling to $100K months does too.
If you're running an agency, doing $20K–$40K per month, and scaling still feels like a guessing game, let’s fix that.
Reply with “$100K” or book a call with me below and I’ll show you what’s missing.
Tim